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Thursday 12 May 2016

super hero

Walt: use similes and metaphors in our writing



Her hair was as a shiny,bright sunset,and a bright beautiful sunshine .Her blue shorts were torn to shreds,and it was like as a curly swirly beach.Then she were a dark rubbish colour,and it is as a pattern. Also her huge strong leg is like a tank and the other leg is like a huge war and some of her power is invisibility and it like they disappear and also her other one is laser eyes and it like a melt marshmallow and the last one her superpower is bouncing and it like jumping up and down like a volley ball.

Task Description:This task is all about smilies and metaphors. We used as and like to describe a superhero. We made our own superheroes using a comic maker . We had to copy our writing before we made our own superhero.



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