the mysterious planet

Walt: write a narrative

Walt: demonstrate understanding of a number of strategies and skills for writing (for example, use of paragraphs, a range of sentence types, descriptive language, punctuation, spelling).

When Dorothy and shawn was about to crash they were feeling horrible.Because Dorothy said would we survive or not survive.Meanwhile When they were in the spaceship, Suddenly ‘Boom’ then the spaceship explode.It was scary because they were in the middle of nowhere but luckily they survive but it was a mysterious planet.When Shawn and Dorothy saw this planet it was dark shaded and that made Shawn really nervous about the crash even Dorothy then they talk about it.But when they talk Dorothy was cold and freezing

Task description:This task we have to write about space and we have to do 5 paragrahs. After that we have to highlight the other stuff and delete it then we have to go to our website and choose our photo then choose our writing then put it on our blog.