WALT: Use interesting words to make your recount more exciting
Wow! Cool what are day at school we had. Oh hi there and yesterday we had are awesome performance at the hall from Duffy, Melanie, and Ashley and there was only team 4 and team 5 who was there.
So when we went to the hall it was very hot and people started to be Exhausted. But luckily the Duffy show begin and when we watch the Duffy show it was about Melanie was bully just like Wyatt the wiggly skeleton but when Duffy recognize that Melanie was bully then Duffy gave her book called Monster bully and it was hilarious how Wyatt keep wiggle and jiggly. But when Melanie and Duffy was in class reading then they heard Ashley in the toilet and Ashley got embarrassed. So then Melanie went to her Ashley and gave her book to Ashley and when she did it was Cool. How Duffy made a invention to see if Ashley doing fine but it was Amazing how Ashley realize that she was being a bully like Grizelda so then Ashley apologize and they became Best friends.
My favourite part of the Duffy shows is when Melanie become friend with Ashley and showing the way. So when I was in assembly I felt to much Excited when we went to the hall. I have learned that when you get bully tell someone and they will help you find a way to become with your bully like Duffy helping Melanie.
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